Wednesday, 20 August 2014

Personification

Room 14 has been doing some writing called personification.
We also had a picture  and I had an old fence,
Then we had to find a buddy and my buddy was Ashlee.
It went like this:

The old fashioned fence,
Rusty and bent,
It's lonely all the time,
Like a crinkly old ladies spine,
It's horizontal on a lean,
It wish it was sparkly clean,
It has a really good view because you see the beach,
But poor old fence can't reach,
It's a drunken fence post,
It's even to old to eat toast.

Sunday, 3 August 2014

Writer club 2

I have finished my writers club story today. The positive was working with other people to combined our story together and the negative was that sometimes she would take forever to replied back the story.  The interesting thing was working with them was awesome to finished  the story!

My TRUMPS Paddel

In term 2 we have been learning about are "you on the waka". Every second week we get together as a class and discuss how we can earn our paddle to make our knowledge waka moving. When we have achieve the success criteria we get a paddle in order, 1 by 1. This is what it looks like when its finished.